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My main WIP is a first person memoir-style novel. It even pushes on the fourth wall, if not breaks it, quite often. I've noticed recently my tendency to use 'I' to begin sentences has grown too much. So, I began trying to break it up by starting sentences with present participle phrases. This became monotonous. I also noticed that 'I' appears so much in the text it makes it look like I've got brackets everywhere.
Does anyone have tips and tricks for increasing sentence structure variety in a FP POV novel?
Thanks!
Does anyone have tips and tricks for increasing sentence structure variety in a FP POV novel?
Thanks!
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