Writer’s_Magic
Sage
When I know something about me is it that I suck at describing. But I don’t know how you find my description. So, I wrote an example. Please, critique it.
Amber makes out as if happen nothing. And all that although you see the mashed potato spot on the amethyst purple school uniform clearly.
Well, I hate my clumsiness. But this is not the only time something like that happened. Last week, I slipped and my spaghetti and dessert (green Jell-O) hit the hair of another student. That looked funny.
Anyway, I grab my napkin. “Let me help ya!” However, it made all worse. It’s not just that the spot increases in size. I smear it on her face unintended. Now she looks a little bit like the Grinch.
Amber makes out as if happen nothing. And all that although you see the mashed potato spot on the amethyst purple school uniform clearly.
Well, I hate my clumsiness. But this is not the only time something like that happened. Last week, I slipped and my spaghetti and dessert (green Jell-O) hit the hair of another student. That looked funny.
Anyway, I grab my napkin. “Let me help ya!” However, it made all worse. It’s not just that the spot increases in size. I smear it on her face unintended. Now she looks a little bit like the Grinch.