SeverinR
Vala
I asked this on a general creative writing sight, and didn't get good suggestions other then
"He wore a blue and white surcoat with swords on each side ofhis chest."
The man wears a blue and white surcoat quartered with alternating colors, with an opposing colored sword emblem on the upper quarters and on his shoulders are three redlines parallel to his neck.
Does this make since and can you picture what I am describing?
If you don't understand:
upper half:
blue-.......................white
white sword emblem---blue sword emblem
lower half:
white --blue
Here is a picture:
http://nertea.the3rdage.net/tutorials/langstrand/surcoat2.jpg
Is there a better way to describe it?
This is his heraldry, and the red lines are rank.
"He wore a blue and white surcoat with swords on each side ofhis chest."
The man wears a blue and white surcoat quartered with alternating colors, with an opposing colored sword emblem on the upper quarters and on his shoulders are three redlines parallel to his neck.
Does this make since and can you picture what I am describing?
If you don't understand:
upper half:
blue-.......................white
white sword emblem---blue sword emblem
lower half:
white --blue
Here is a picture:
http://nertea.the3rdage.net/tutorials/langstrand/surcoat2.jpg
Is there a better way to describe it?
This is his heraldry, and the red lines are rank.