MagicFame1500
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So I decided to combine my MC with the different ideas I presented of what I wanted to use and what we've all discussed. This is just a rough blue print of him, let me know your thoughts.
I decided to go with my MC to have been born to a human/demonic species mixed dad and an angelic/wolf-like species mom. The MC's grandad was a Vietnam vet, who was injected with demonic blood, transforming him into a demonic super soldier. MC's grandad then met a full blooded demonic woman, giving birth to MC's dad, making the dad a 1/4 human, 1/3 demonic. The dad would have served Desert Storm. Then at some point the dad meets the MC's mom, who's a descendant of an ancient samurai clan, which were a mix of angelic-like species and wolf-like species, which her ancestors also descended from the Kami wolf god and an angelic Tenbu being. The MC's mom saved the dad, which they gave birth to the MC, who was born a mix of a demonic/angelic/wolf-like bloodline.
To hide their son from this corrupted company,(which they may of been killed by) they send baby MC to an adopted family they can trust, where the MC grows up in a small suburban US town. The MC wasn't to into sports but he trained in karate, which was a national sport he embraced, which was apart of his culture he inherited and he was really good at it. One day at age 15 he practices training which manifested some of his powers, which alerted the bad company, sending demon hunters out to track him, resulting in them killing his adopted parents. The leader of the demon hunting group was in fact his grandad, but he tricked the MC into believing his adoptive parents were murdered by demonic beings. The grandad was against his own kind and worked for the company to track, kill or capture other demons/or celestial beings. The MC's powers were so immense they wanted to use him for the company so they brainwashed the MC into becoming a demon hunter for the company and for him to also get his revenge on demons(which he's lead to believe are the killers of his AP family). Eventually he learns the truth that his grandad is bad and this company he works for, after they betray him and try to kill him, which the MC escapes off the grid somewhere in the North Pacific ocean on a deep hidden island for now.
I plan to use this story, any way I can fix it or it sounds good enough?
Thanks all.
I decided to go with my MC to have been born to a human/demonic species mixed dad and an angelic/wolf-like species mom. The MC's grandad was a Vietnam vet, who was injected with demonic blood, transforming him into a demonic super soldier. MC's grandad then met a full blooded demonic woman, giving birth to MC's dad, making the dad a 1/4 human, 1/3 demonic. The dad would have served Desert Storm. Then at some point the dad meets the MC's mom, who's a descendant of an ancient samurai clan, which were a mix of angelic-like species and wolf-like species, which her ancestors also descended from the Kami wolf god and an angelic Tenbu being. The MC's mom saved the dad, which they gave birth to the MC, who was born a mix of a demonic/angelic/wolf-like bloodline.
To hide their son from this corrupted company,(which they may of been killed by) they send baby MC to an adopted family they can trust, where the MC grows up in a small suburban US town. The MC wasn't to into sports but he trained in karate, which was a national sport he embraced, which was apart of his culture he inherited and he was really good at it. One day at age 15 he practices training which manifested some of his powers, which alerted the bad company, sending demon hunters out to track him, resulting in them killing his adopted parents. The leader of the demon hunting group was in fact his grandad, but he tricked the MC into believing his adoptive parents were murdered by demonic beings. The grandad was against his own kind and worked for the company to track, kill or capture other demons/or celestial beings. The MC's powers were so immense they wanted to use him for the company so they brainwashed the MC into becoming a demon hunter for the company and for him to also get his revenge on demons(which he's lead to believe are the killers of his AP family). Eventually he learns the truth that his grandad is bad and this company he works for, after they betray him and try to kill him, which the MC escapes off the grid somewhere in the North Pacific ocean on a deep hidden island for now.
I plan to use this story, any way I can fix it or it sounds good enough?
Thanks all.
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