Toby Johnson
Minstrel
In my newest book, there is a large city with a central castle, how do i describe this though. Do I, like the Hobbit, describe the whole thing in the first couple pages. just like how JRR describes the whole hobbit hole in the first couple pages and then doesn't need to speak about it again, or do I describe it in increments as Senton (the main character) is walking about, so we see it as he sees it?