Ghost
Inkling
I think your issue is more about
B) The clothing
and
C) The "tribal" paint.
It screams African Tribal person and not in a good way.
Yeah, I'm in agreement that those are what's rubbing people the wrong way. I have some more concrete suggestions now. Nix the headband. Nix the necklace thingy because it reminds me of neck rings. I also question the earlobe stretching. I don't think her eyes look jaundiced, but the yellow irises might read that way to some folks.
I'll again suggest looking at dinosaurs and other animals and seeing what you can salvage from them in terms of clothing. Take what's important to her culture and translate it to clothes. For example, if hunting is most important, she might clothe herself in a way that she can carry more weapons.
You can have something like face paint, neck rings or earlobe stretching, but you have to explain why it's done in her culture. When you do all of them, it looks like an indigenous people mash up. I think that's why I saw "generic tribal person" earlier.
This may be just me--in fact, it probably is just me--but your girl has no support. I can't imagine running around in a tube top without it slipping off during my adventures. If she has to wear a top, it should be one that will stay on.