R. R. Hunter
Troubadour
While writing some dialog, I stumbled upon a neat opportunity to character develop. In these lines, know that the character Lord Vestrim Underton is pretty much comic relief and the setting is in Marcuso's mansion where he lives alone with his young apprentice Vikor.
Without further adieu,
Marcuso shifted uncomfortably then spoke, “Lord-,” he restarted, “Vestrim, I do thank you for coming to my home. It upsets me to treat you in such an unkempt manner as this. I hope that you've considered purchasing some of my inventory.”
Vikor brought in the wine, and served each a glass starting with Vestrim. Lord Underton picked up the conversation. “Unkempt manor. Lad, this place is spotless and there’s not a maid for miles."
Without further adieu,
Marcuso shifted uncomfortably then spoke, “Lord-,” he restarted, “Vestrim, I do thank you for coming to my home. It upsets me to treat you in such an unkempt manner as this. I hope that you've considered purchasing some of my inventory.”
Vikor brought in the wine, and served each a glass starting with Vestrim. Lord Underton picked up the conversation. “Unkempt manor. Lad, this place is spotless and there’s not a maid for miles."
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