Jerry
Minstrel
Switching from one's perspective to another in one scene in an omniscient view. I'm writing in an omniscient viewpoint and I have two characters within one scene who we are concentrating on. I'm doing my best, or trying, to stay out of their heads and head-hop - and using the omniscient narrator to tell the story. I would love some examples in fiction that shows this duality and transition if possible. Not a multiple POV where we split into page breaks or chapter headings, or moving from first person to third, but handling perspective from the omniscient narrator's POV within one scene and or paragraph as the narrator describes the scene and or possible thoughts. I think I have something, but want to explore the proper use of words and description and see if I'm on the right path.
Many thanks!
Many thanks!