I delayed last week and almost forgot!
"It is curious to reflect upon the rapid advancement of humanity in the last 1000 years. I find it appalling that the few remaining mortal races, that were not human and survived the Purge of Kabbahla, have otherwise disappeared. How long has it been, dear sister, since we have heard from the Fawnites in our Black Forest? Or the Fae from the lands across the southern seas? Too long. The world is changed I fear, and not for the better."
Here! Have some extra world building because why not?
Same thing as other chapters with editing outlines. You don't need to read all of that unless you really wanna ask me what the heck I was thinking when I made the first draft!
Chapter 6
"It is curious to reflect upon the rapid advancement of humanity in the last 1000 years. I find it appalling that the few remaining mortal races, that were not human and survived the Purge of Kabbahla, have otherwise disappeared. How long has it been, dear sister, since we have heard from the Fawnites in our Black Forest? Or the Fae from the lands across the southern seas? Too long. The world is changed I fear, and not for the better."
Here! Have some extra world building because why not?
Same thing as other chapters with editing outlines. You don't need to read all of that unless you really wanna ask me what the heck I was thinking when I made the first draft!
Chapter 6