Adela
Minstrel
So I have a scene in an older draft where a warrior gets hit with an arrow in the shoulder. I've since read that shoulder wounds can NOT be shrugged off and that people have major arteries in that area. This can be deadly. Guess we've all grown up seeing movies and shows where people shrug off these wounds and keep fighting. He does WAY too much and just keeps going after this and even pulls the arrow out. Something I now know is a stupid thing to do. I'm at an impasse and don't know how to rewrite this or give him another type of injury where he could keep going.
Basically, what should I do? What kinds of injuries could I give him where he could be down for the count but not totally out of the fight? Help!
Basically, what should I do? What kinds of injuries could I give him where he could be down for the count but not totally out of the fight? Help!