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AlexS reacted to Karlin's post in the thread Plz help me come up with an antagonist for my story with
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Purim is approaching soon. Get a set of family and friends to dress up as teh different characters, and have them act out your story... -
AlexS replied to the thread Plz help me come up with an antagonist for my story.Sorry I did not read all the replies before posting. Great minds etc...
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AlexS replied to the thread Plz help me come up with an antagonist for my story.Plot twist: Vashti *is* the antagonist. She's a Daenerys-like character, seeming like a protagonist at first, seeking initially to...
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AlexS replied to the thread Kings and Witches - it's complete!.It varies. At some points, the reader is expected to feel "ok this is done and we're not coming back to it" and at others "I wonder if...
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AlexS replied to the thread Kings and Witches - it's complete!.Let's say, around points where a subplot has been naturally exhausted and another begins.
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AlexS replied to the thread Kings and Witches - it's complete!.There are going to be questionaires at certain checkpoints. This is of course not a fass/fail test for the reader, but info-gathering...
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That’s actually a very strong way to frame it assuming the reader knows nothing beyond the blurb puts you much closer to a real...
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AlexS replied to the thread Kings and Witches - it's complete!.The whole structure. And we're going to assume the reader knows nothing except for the 150-word blurb
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Congratulations on completing a 97,000-word novel that’s a huge achievement, especially for a first installment in a trilogy. The blend...
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AlexS replied to the thread Kings and Witches - it's complete!.First, I want to know the multiple storylines coexist in harmony and their combination is enjoyable, rather than confusing. Because if...
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AlexS replied to the thread Prose Style Concern.He asked, I answered. It's up to him what to do with my answer, I don't insist. But notably, I answered him, not you.
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I should've made that more clear, but only the first two paragraphs are meant to be part of the same text. They're written as if they're...
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AlexS replied to the thread Prose Style Concern.Thank you for your service. I lived in the middle east for 26 years
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AlexS replied to the thread Prose Style Concern."The man’s almost-corpse dropped with the heaviness of a boulder" Perhaps try "The half-dead man dropped, heavy as a boulder"? Neither...