Recent content by Bloodywake

"So help me now If your starting a eleventh Fast and Furious script you'll spit sparks for a year."

See that's what I love about writing fantasy fiction books. I don't have to explain anything that goes with the genre's some what established thought process from all the writer's before me, but if I am going to completely tear down already established overall thought's about something, then I...

Why does it have to be the rubber band effect? Doesn't ripples in water in a container not do the same thing once they get to the wall of the container? The energy once again tries to get back to the point of origin but it also collides with the other ripples on the way outward do they not...

This is definitely not the flaw he has to overcome, this would be a speed bump compared to how biggest issue of a imp inhabiting his mind, with this construct he just realized this construct is nothing compared to the other one designed to spy that he already fought before. He's being stalked by...

It's just the irl trolling grimlin that I made a mistake and fed years ago that got in my head. Like you said he was willing to part with everything except for the scabbard he eventually circles back for. Theirs only two things that he honestly would be mentally and physically distraught over...

Here is most of the scene minus him arguing with his split personality. Oren didn't have time to think about a plan or strategy on how to deal with this creature. Just as he leapfrogged the horse, he landed in between the two beings and formed the shield that was halved on each arm, the...

The only other individuals around at this point are his split personality and the horse.

I know that I was desperate and got really drunk last night, but this was scraping beyond the bottom of the second barrel.

He ran away from a fight with a construct. He don't realize he's being stalked by not just one but several different types of them from little bugs up to humanoid imposters. Honestly I think that I just humanized the MC more than he was previously, He even lost track of numerous important...

So my MC don't realize this at the moment however I think that I may have inadvertently just destroyed his credibility of being able to be trusted as a hero. Has anyone else accidentally done this before?

Welcome Mist-drahon, I am also new to the site like joined just this week. So far I have had a very positive experience here hope you do to. And look forward to seeing your work eventually.

Also the other issue that you face with homunculi specificly, they lack some very important parts to cast more complex spells. The first and most difficult huddle for complex spells is their extremely low I.Q. Then you come to the next hurdle to over come they generally don't have the ability...

You also would want to eliminate any and all the old rackets like shaking down stores for protection, running the booking wire joints, possibly eliminate them selling drugs, and anything else you think is to political or publicly frowned upon a have them move towards more back room deals...

Honestly nyou have already done exactly what you asked about. You say different nobles and such hold the purse strings to various gangs, that's exactly what you asked. Now if your asking how do you incorporate the actual wise guy mentality that's a totally different thing, Each gang could...

Thank you guys very much. Even though I am a very confident individual who was able to get a single published poem back when I was twelve, even though I haven't stopped writing ever, I'm now 43 and actually trying to figure out the actual process of getting a book published.