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  1. CL Frey

    How to draw a map AFTER you've written your story

    @Thinker X, you're right, this would get exponentially more complicated for a major, multi-faceted world with multiple story lines. Luckily my plot line was fairly simple ;)
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    Vielmond's Works

    I love your painterly style!
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    How to draw a map AFTER you've written your story

    I posted this on my blog a while back and thought I would post a link to it here in case anyone else finds it helpful. Basically, I had written out a plotline and a rough first draft and then decided I needed a map. But I had river crossings and travel back and forth across a valley and...
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    Just Showing This Off (cover for my anthology)

    *blushing* Thank you :) Have spent the last 13 years in graphic design so I should hope I managed to pick something up along the way ;)
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    Just Showing This Off (cover for my anthology)

    The font is Charlemagne in case anyone's wondering. Very similar to Trajan, but a bit more medieval and not nearly so overused. PS - I agree with your FB page, I like the second version of the first cover (with the script) over the version with the type between the shadows. I can picture it in...
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    Just Showing This Off (cover for my anthology)

    Sorry... I know you aren't asking for any more input, but I threw this together before I read your last comment. It's going to be hard to read at a small size, but in this case it would be more the image that catches people's eye. I think you might be better off that way anyway, since it's...
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    Just Showing This Off (cover for my anthology)

    The biggest problem setting words over an image is getting them to not fight! LOL. So, because there are diagonal lines (the shadows) under the top layer of vertical lines (the type), the reader has to do a bit of deciphering either way. I do think it's more legible with the type at that...
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    Cover for freebie novelette - opinions would be welcome

    Yep! Looking not too bad :) Now I'd put a bit less space between Shadows of Nadril and the subtitle. You might have to keep playing with the overall spacing of the elements, but keep at it til you're happy - and keep different versions so you can compare changes. Good luck!
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    Cover for freebie novelette - opinions would be welcome

    I like the one without the firebirds better. They seem a bit out of place and confuse the text. You could try making Shadows Under a tiny bit smaller, so there's a bit more air around it on the left and right sides, and make Nadril a bit bigger, then close the space a bit between Shadows Under...
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    Cover Art For A Short Story/Novelette

    If you went with the Collector's truth, I'd try using drop caps for the C and the T - that would move the capital T away from the word Collector's a little bit, so it's closer to the rest of the word Truth. But I must admit The Rage Within fits the picture better...
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    Cover for freebie novelette - opinions would be welcome

    I think one of the biggest problems that says "amateur" for the cover is the font. It's kind of pixellated - meaning the edges are all jagged. You've got a nice enough background and picture happening; since you've got the type placed the way you want it, maybe it would be cheap enough for a...
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    New Kid

    Historians! Always handy people to have around :D
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    Short Stories vs Novels

    I can't speak for anyone else, but here's what I found works for me. I write and edit a lot for my line of work and it's all non-fiction. While this helps with the sentence structure, grammar, etc, it's not the same as crafting fiction. I've had an epic story in mind for at least the last five...
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