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Demesnedenoir replied to the thread Into the Lucid World.I don't have a method; I've been lucid dreaming since I was about 5, best I can recall. The trick is not taking control all the time, as... -
Demesnedenoir replied to the thread Hello fellow writers.Welcome aboard! Drink the Kool-Aid, but boil it first.
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Demesnedenoir replied to the thread Is "Head Hopping" Good or Bad?.Agreed. Either go full on Omniscient or stick to Limited.
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I feel the others have covered this one. Sometimes the head hopping is noticeable and jarring, and sometimes it slips in and you wont...
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Yes, this all makes sense. One reason I was a little unclear about this is that I've never written in omniscient POV, and I adhere to...
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Demesnedenoir replied to the thread Is "Head Hopping" Good or Bad?.I don't do google links. Just post a snippet or email it to me for a brief review. My gut tells me: If you are in classical 3rd Om...
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Demesnedenoir replied to the thread Is "Head Hopping" Good or Bad?.It's a pejorative for a reason, as it isn't simply switching POV. It's an error in switching POV.
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Demesnedenoir replied to the thread Is "Head Hopping" Good or Bad?.It's one of those things, it's hard to tell if it's working without seeing it.
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Demesnedenoir replied to the thread Is "Head Hopping" Good or Bad?.It's hard as hell to catch sometimes, most risky for me when writing one POV with another POV character in the scene, LMAO. That feels...
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I did that in 'Exiles: Pilgrimage.' One of the characters settled down with her toddler in a human village (the only one for thousands...
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Demesnedenoir replied to the thread Dense Prose or Rich Prose?.I'm not even sure what you mean... you can pack years into a sentence or pages into a few moments. The example sentence seems fairly...
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Demesnedenoir replied to the thread Dense Prose or Rich Prose?.That would be why I don't watch videos unless it's for a repair on something, LMAO. It stymies my brain how much time people waste on...
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Demesnedenoir replied to the thread Is "Head Hopping" Good or Bad?.IMO, it's a bit misunderstood, like Show Don't Tell™. Here's my take: real HeadHopping™ isn't 3rd Omniscient like Dune, it is...
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Demesnedenoir replied to the thread Mixing first and third person?.The Name of the Wind is framed for a third person/first person as I recall. Without details I don't know what you're actually doing. I...
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Demesnedenoir replied to the thread Mixing first and third person?.This totally depends on the frame. In my upcoming War of Seven Lies, some chapters will be written blending 1st, 2d, and 3rd, along with...
