Someone may have already stated this, I haven't made it through ALL the pages of responses yet, but perhaps you mean his vision brightened, not necessarily his eyes. Eyes are going to be taken as a physical attribute, so when they brighten people will think you mean his actual eyes got...
Thank you everyone. You have all reassured me that I can get the help I need here regardless of the direction I want to take. It is not my intention to take over any part of the threads with purely sci-fi directed conversations, but good to know that I can broach the subject here and there for...
Welcome to the site, I just joined as well a couple days ago. Within a few days of talking to people here, I got the courage to start writing and tonight just wrote my first 762 words. Very supportive group of folks here!
Feel free to message me, I'd love to take a look at your book. I'm not...
I joined this site for two reasons:
I love fantasy, which is most of what I've read my entire life
There seems to be a great community here, as well as a wealth of information
But, since it is a very fantasy orientated site, are people open to proofing and/or helping with material...
Magician by Feist is one I'll have to agree with, it was the first fantasy book I ever read, assigned by my teacher in High School. It's probably the only book I've read several times over.
Fairy Tale also by Feist. No, I'm not trying to promote Feist here :) But, this was the first...
I've read some books with sad endings and they had such a good story that it sat okay with me. However, I have read books, like the Darksword Trilogy that each book ended depressing, leaving me to hope for something good to happen to the character in the next one. I got to the end of the...
Hi,
Figured the best thing to do being new here was stop by and do a little introduction. I go by Impatience here, which is very descriptive of who I am. I've never written a novel, short story, or anything of the like before, but I've been wanting to give it a shot for a long time...