I will follow your advice and try to rewrite the chapter with more details and shorter sentences. Thank you for that. Writing something that is happening in my head in words is hard in my mind the image is so clear but when I start to write it I am at a loss.
Yeah, I have read this. It's one of the major influences on my work. But as I told you, except for the name, nothing else is in common and the main character will not be using that name in the fantasy world.
No problem if I wanted to be professionally published I will use another story once I understand the ropes of writing an good novel people will want to read right now I am just experimenting and if you could explain the situation a little bit more it would help me a lot
Really can u send me the link I mean Daniel Faust I know but the same title and name I want to check it out and change accordingly but if just the name Daniel Faust is just the earth name not the name character will b using in the other world
Really can u send me the link I mean Daniel Faust I know but the same title and name I want to check it out and change accordingly but if just the name Daniel Faust is just the earth name not the name character will b using in the other world
Hello iam a new writer in fantasy based story I have just begun a story plot based on a mythical story line I would like some people tell me it's either trash or not
This not a plot to get readers I genuinely want to know if what I am writing is only for me or is it a little bit good...