I have written a novel, and some of it will appear in my portfolio as individual chapters.
The name of the story is Save a Wish for Later:
In 1988, in Baltimore, MD, two students; Rolfing Whitworth and Beth Kayler, enter first grade. Beth,
having psychic proclivities, informs Rolfing...
When young Rolfing was five or six, he was introduced to the traumatizing
conformity of first grade. Regardless of convention, defiant of imitation, he
quickly learned, on his first day, in fact, that there was an oasis in the
cerebral aridity that he found himself involved in. This oasis was...
I'd give some description of the speaker, even if it is something like, "Another, slumped against a cold wall,
shouted,". It depends on the tempo you are trying to establish.
The way you have written the dialogue imparts an element of impersonalization, helping to establish
the prisoners as a...
I don't do violence. My fantasies consist of love, humor, spiritual evolution, beauty, understanding, harmony, melody, friendship, gentleness and balance. These are the worlds I choose to create.
Hi Ginger. It sure seems that this is a friendly place, so here I am being friendly.
I joined just three days ago, but have been shown more support than in the last ten years,
on the "outside" world. This, I can work with. I hope you reach your goals.
Sheila, Butterfly, et al: Thanks for the support. I hope others enjoy reading Save A Wish For Later
as much as i enjoyed writing it.
Sheila, I'll definitely read your story. Thanks for the offer.:)
Hello, and redundant greetings, as such.
I have recently joined this website, and now find that I may have "mistakenly" entered a strange and foreign land. That is, I may have, but I cannot be certain. Would you lend me an ear? Please. Become part of my problem.
I have completed...
"Chit-chat. Chit-chat." The rythymn of this mantric suggestion rebounded like a manic pogo stick and swayed, yet, like the gleaming arm of an obsessed metronome.
"The time has come!" Llewellyn concluded, rising up off the toilet. Strewn around him, on the floor, were publications various and...