Recent content by LuciferXerxes

Can someone help me come up with different name's for the Virtues? I want to do what WooHooMan suggested, but I still need some basis. The Virtues were meant to be the government officials representing their Sin. IF you could give ideas for words that mean the opposite of their sin, that would...

Okay, So it's like this: The sin's are evil, but have good in them. I like what you said, And I think i'll do it. Never mention the virtues, but instead lace them into the Sins. "too much Pride leads to foolishness, but if you find the balance, you can use it to your advantage, for good." Does...

Yea, I left the conflict lacking. For one thing, I knew I wanted a War to have happened ~so many years prior, that sparked the need for flesh Runes. Other than that I don't have much. The main conflict is this technologically advanced race that hates Void runes and their power, because of what...

I understand what you mean. With the whole Virtues and Sins thing, it's based off other things than "Christian Undertones." Mainly, a few of my inspirations. Essentially, at the beginning, I wanted a Final Fantasy-esque Fullmetal Alchemist. Now it's changed a lot but still. Originally, It was...

Hello! I am relatively new to this site, but not to writing. I have been working on a pseudo-fantasy concept for a while, and I would like some feedback on my core ideas. I don't know if this is the place for dropping all my ideas, so if it fits in a better place, do tell me. I don't know how...