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  1. Michael Roy

    Is giving mortals a way to temporary immortality too op?

    Thanks for all the feedback so far, everyone!
  2. Michael Roy

    Is giving mortals a way to temporary immortality too op?

    I guess I should have also added that the majority of the protagonists are kids that were around the same age as Harry Potter in his first year. My main character finds out that she is part-goddess as well, but I'm not sure that's relevant or not. I'm not sure I want to kill off a bunch of...
  3. Michael Roy

    Is giving mortals a way to temporary immortality too op?

    I think you're right. That's more of what I'm going for. I couldn't think for the life of me what the word was for some reason. Some days I can't think straight. Thanks! Maybe I should change it to invulnerability to temporary immortality.
  4. Michael Roy

    Is giving mortals a way to temporary immortality too op?

    I have a story finished up, but I'm reconsidering making some major edits. I came up with two potions that could give mortals (aka humans) temporary powers in this story. One called Immortalem Interficere allows a mortal person the power to kill an immortal person for 24 hours. The catch is...
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