Hello, pmmg, thank you for your time to write a feedback for me, it is very much appreciated. I had wrote this story for a very long time and its just been kept it dusted, but thank you for your compliment.
I'll be taking your suggestion and correction for the grammar. And I really appreciate...
First of, thank you very much for reading my story.
To answer your question, yes, I do plan to make it into children book illustration. I actually had this story for a very long time and I don't know where to get it start. When I found this website, I just post it so I can test how good it is...
I'm writing this story and needed feedback from fantasy lover out there. Don't miss out any critic and just give it all you had.
Betta Fish Fairy
Once, there was a small lake where all animals lived in harmony. You can find lots of animal group gatherings. There was a mother duck quacking...