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I've decided to go with Omniscient as Close Third feels a bit too restricted. That being said I'd like to see some examples of it being... -
Naruzeldamaster replied to the thread Is "Head Hopping" Good or Bad?.Roger, I feel like Close third is too close so I might go omniscient but then I'll have to look up some good examples of that to get me...
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Naruzeldamaster replied to the thread Is "Head Hopping" Good or Bad?.My writing style is somewhere in-between omniscient and "singular" POV. I generally try to keep the POV between the 'main' characters...
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Yes, this all makes sense. One reason I was a little unclear about this is that I've never written in omniscient POV, and I adhere to...
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Naruzeldamaster replied to the thread Is "Head Hopping" Good or Bad?.Hmm, I could post the chapter once it's finished (It's a chapter with 4 of the main party involved in the story and there's a lot of POV...
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Naruzeldamaster replied to the thread Is "Head Hopping" Good or Bad?.As I've said earlier in the thread, it's a little more controllable when it's only two/three main characters (Doesn't happen as...
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Naruzeldamaster replied to the thread Is "Head Hopping" Good or Bad?.I tend to do this a lot more often than I should, I don't know why but I feel the need to explain a character's emotions or thoughts on...
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Naruzeldamaster replied to the thread Is "Head Hopping" Good or Bad?.Head hopping is sometimes used as a derogatory way to define a writing style in which the Point of View is shifted (keyword too) often...
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To be clear, I am aware that in excess, any writing thing is terrible for a story. Particularly if it's used poorly. I see a lot of...
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Not necessarily. Mixing first and third person isn’t uncommon if it’s clear and consistent. If the POV shifts make sense for the story...
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Naruzeldamaster replied to the thread Mixing first and third person?.Interesting, I don't think I'm advanced enough to use that technique yet (I'm still learning to tame my head hopping habit lol) I...
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Naruzeldamaster replied to the thread Dense Prose or Rich Prose?.As a more serious response to this thread, I'd say do whatever one you feel more comfy with, just be cautious of purple prose. It is a...
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Naruzeldamaster replied to the thread Hail, And well Met!.but but: Also welcome in. lol
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Naruzeldamaster replied to the thread What Are You Playing Now?.Same, I'm working on 4 right now and they're all chapter 3 ish.
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Naruzeldamaster replied to the thread How to 'kill' the he said/she said habit?.I think the thing that spawned this thread is that I feel like I'm using it a lot? But like, it's weird, cause I'm trying to branch out...
