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    Basic Question, need help!

    i havent heard of indonesian fantasy writing story forum(i will look into this further), and indonesian arent known for fantasy story or any good narratives book for that matter, according to statistic indonesian have low literacy rate. they are not the perfect audiences in my opinion, they dont...
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    Basic Question, need help!

    thank youu for your kind support
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    Basic Question, need help!

    thank you for your kind advice since magic is a rare commodity, i think mc will struggle quite a bit, to learn his power without being seen on his jobs and dot forget mana, how will a world without magic can fulfill depleted mana of a magician, i havent thought of that yet i have written an...
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    Basic Question, need help!

    hii lynea, i've write a scene for my story you can try to read it in my reply to the moderator thanks, and tell me what you think
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    Basic Question, need help!

    i havent write any battle scene but, i've make a example on what the story would be like. Detective scene explanation : since all monster have different approach, our mc is trying to deduct the culprit story : 1888, 2 november The order sent me and Edward to dutch indies(modern day indonesia)...
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    Basic Question, need help!

    helloo thanks for reaching out, i will try to write a battle scene, i usually able to imagine it in my head, it just i have troubles in writing it down in word and i will try to create a descriptive scene too. Regards.
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    Basic Question, need help!

    yes indeed, i was blown away with the magic in dishonored game and i ask my self, what if i make a story, about monster hunting secret order Thanks for your appreciation
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    Basic Question, need help!

    hi, thank you for your opinion, and the theme is not steampunk it's just normal tech, like in the order 1888 or red dead redemption 2, old classy era like that so it would very similar to ac creed syndicate + monster and magic.
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    Basic Question, need help!

    hello all, my name is Patrick jo, as you can see i am new on this platform, actually i've been searching for this kind of website before, to help me get an inspiration for my story. So the Idea for my writing is called Saint Michaelus, its an order created in medieval europe to terminate...
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