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  1. Raziel

    How does it work as a catchy summary?

    I agree You are right. They probably didn't have them in 1812. I'm new to writing a 'timeperiod' piece. (Thinking alternate history style or something) I like the Steampunk gadgets and world so I was thinking a side character, Simmons, would be the maintenece man of sorts who had the know...
  2. Raziel

    How does it work as a catchy summary?

    Thanks for the input..the story is in it's early stages yet (still at the inception point) and I'm just looking for some feedback on making catchy quick paragraphs. I forgot to mention that the story takes place in 1812 and it's a mysterious woman that gives the priest his orders. Also a...
  3. Raziel

    How does it work as a catchy summary?

    The Priest, (summary so far...) A corrupt priest is enjoying his brand new church, full Wine seller, and a full pocket book. Suddenly the large dormant volcano in the city's Southern eye erupts. An ash cloud descents upon the town trapping the few citizens into the one massive church. The...
  4. Raziel

    NaNo Progress

    50109 for the 28th..what a wild ride!!
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    NaNo Progress

    46496 as of the 26th..
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    NaNo Progress

    44424 for the 25th
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    NaNo Progress

    40752 so far for the 25th.
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    NaNo Progress

    32240 as of the 19th. Just over 4,000 words for the day.
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    NaNo Progress

    23971 so far for the 16.. falling behind a little.
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    NaNo Progress

    18324 for the 12th so far.
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    NaNo Progress

    14878 for the 9th
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    NaNo Progress

    13,280 for the 8th. Happy birthday indeed. :cool:
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    NaNo Progress

    11, 423 for the 6th. This is probably the most I've ever written on one subject, ever. And it is awesome!
  14. Raziel

    NaNo Progress

    As of 1am on the 5 I now have 5,742 words. I think I hit my first roadblock or rather, fork in the road. I have something really good itching to get out but I can't connect it at the moment. I think this is where I should move to another part and work with that. This is a great. My thanks...
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    NaNo Progress

    3952 words and counting, I don't think it's very good but when I don't like it others usually do, go figure. Now off to bed at 6pm, arrgh, 3rd shift.
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