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You are right. They probably didn't have them in 1812. I'm new to writing a 'timeperiod' piece. (Thinking alternate history style or something) I like the Steampunk gadgets and world so I was thinking a side character, Simmons, would be the maintenece man of sorts who had the know...
Thanks for the input..the story is in it's early stages yet (still at the inception point) and I'm just looking for some feedback on making catchy quick paragraphs.
I forgot to mention that the story takes place in 1812 and it's a mysterious woman that gives the priest his orders. Also a...
The Priest, (summary so far...)
A corrupt priest is enjoying his brand new church, full Wine seller, and a full pocket book. Suddenly the large dormant volcano in the city's Southern eye erupts. An ash cloud descents upon the town trapping the few citizens into the one massive church. The...
As of 1am on the 5 I now have 5,742 words. I think I hit my first roadblock or rather, fork in the road. I have something really good itching to get out but I can't connect it at the moment. I think this is where I should move to another part and work with that. This is a great. My thanks...