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    Trying to put together my Magic Metal magic system. But I feel like its a mile wide and not very deep.

    Thats more or less the premise already. The diease, the Withering, is trying to turn you into somthing new. The more you suffer from the diease the higher the chance you die, but also the more biometal in your body the strong a mage you will be. There is almost no way to incease your biometal...
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    Trying to put together my Magic Metal magic system. But I feel like its a mile wide and not very deep.

    Help with my magical living metal magic system I need help making my magic system more put together. I have a bunch of disparate ideas, at this point I have culled most of them, but I still cannot seem to fit together whats left. I will skip over all the backstory and world building to keep this...
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    Machine Magic/Mecha Magic

    Cleaned this up alot. I am happy with it but I would just like to know peoples thoughts. I feel like I could make a lot of fun societal ramifications for all of this. But at the moment just looking for thoughts on the system iin a vaccume. The Clockwork Plane, a sub dimension created by the...
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    Mecha Machine Magic. Hit a wall, need help.

    Yeah. I have a more concrete idea than beforeand what I am looking for. Think I may just make a new post.
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    Mecha Machine Magic. Hit a wall, need help.

    I guess that is my problem. I have these ideas, like you said the gears are pretty hard but then the concepts soft. I feel like I have the blocks for somthing interesting but cant quite figure out how to put them together. But I can answer a few of these. 1. COST: Any mage can channel their...
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    Mecha Machine Magic. Hit a wall, need help.

    Yeah it is alot of detail. For other things I have not done this, but I kind of wanted to experiment, see how I can push things. Nver thought of it but yeah I guess kinda? Except everyone is aware of it. In most societys it is kinda of like a "greater good" kind of thing. Ihmm I will have to...
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    Mecha Machine Magic. Hit a wall, need help.

    Trying to develop a magic system, where mech are the foci, and is some what machine themed. Trying for a more logical system that leaves room for creativity. Bouncing around so many ideas, following some then hitting a dead end. I need some external input. What I am going for is an artificer or...
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