Recent content by TBraswell

I appreciate all of the comments and suggestions. To be clear, the climax of the story is the witnessing of the king being killed and mr. Big bad evil man has assumed the throne. They see this from a distance and decide to sneak away from the castle where they were and try to find a nobleman to...

Thank you, all of you, for your kind welcomes. And I surely will have a cup of joe, though, I shan't have cupofjoe as I am no cannibal. ;-)

I appreciate the suggestions and I have come to the conclusion that I will indeed need to write a time jump. I may recap like has been suggested as that will give some needed fleshing-out to the cliffhanger I intend to leave as a lead-in to the next book in the series.

I suppose a time jump would work, but the premise of the return trip is fleeing from a newly crowned king which wants the group dead for the witnes of his poisoning the late king. So, I'm not sure if I should do snippits, scenes at various points and connect them via time jump or just go with...

I have a minor hiccup in my story at the moment. After spending a lot of time walking, hiking, sneaking... to the climax of the story, I am needed to return to what is essentially the starting point of my story. Horses are the only means of transportation in this world and the area of land they...

I have been lurking on here for about a week or so as to test the waters, so to speak. While my experience has been largely limited to the world building area, I would say - based on my highly limited observations - that I will be comfortable here and that I am among kindred spirits. You all...