It varies with what the main purpose of the story you are writing. If it is more about the world in which the story takes place like very much how LOTR is, then being more descriptive is the way you want to go. If you want more of the event or action for the plot of your story, then you have to...
Chapter 3:
Strangers from afar
Throughout the night, Aewyn often used Lyian’s still lit lanterns to guide her way. She walked the distance to the village; stopping only to take a drink from the wineskin or check the fish. The morning sun came with warmth, along with the sweet twitter of...
Chapter 1:
A Familiar Place
A
ewyn glanced off into the horizon, the yellow-orange-pink sky receding behind mountains that seemed to loom over her small world. She glanced over the ice glazed land, searching for the fishing hole she made earlier that month. “About six leagues north of the...
Hey, I been watching the series BattleStar Galatica. Not the really old one but the semi recent remake. Has anyone else watched this series. What do you think?
I'm Tera-lon, here to contribute to the world of fantansy. I have a story that I am posting called Aewyn: A New Age over in the showcase. Come check it out and tell me what you think!::D
I kind of like the series so far. It is slow to get started, but it is finally getting to a key part in the show. I wanted to see more people get eaten though. Dinosaurs was kind of what got me into the series, see people have to face the ferocious animals.
Really, if people had really stuck through and read the series to the end, the writing matured as each book came out. The story had a great plot and storyline, and as the writer matured in his writing, so did the characters such as eragon. Yes, it was written by a fifteen year old at the time...