Thank you for the reply, i cant in fact introduce the enemy as a legend in anyway, i could but it also take away from the overall story to assume they had always existed within the environment of the world vs. what the world the has become as a result of them showing up. I could see in using...
Hmmmm, another interesting perspective and i see how she does indeed to do that but at the same-time it is hard for someone that has never done so, to make that translation on ones own in order for it to come across correctly. It seems like Snape was in fact more of a distraction from the...
Ive looked at point of views like that indeed, iam trying to see how i can give clues, without losing the reader itself. It is indeed difficult in bring about that of the enemy or an emerging enemy without giving it away right of the bat. I don't want to climax the story prematurely as i expect...
Iam having a hard time with two areas that relate to introducing an enemy, when and how do I reveal, but not reveal while introducing it or what it might be. How do I go about discussing it, without knowing who the enemy is? The enemy will be revealed, at segments, but will not be completely...
Hmmmm, interesting and at times i find myself in the same boat but no matter the direction and world, I think if you have real world and fantasy, sci-fi somehow intersecting you could use historical perspectives in a very real way that would give that of the reader an appreciation. You don’t...
I see what you are saying, ive looked to those perspectives in looking at the problem in front of me. As well, the guild iam apart of has stated the same thing about pushing onto writing it out, instead of long breaks in between. Which makes sense, but RL at the same-time gets in the way of that...