Thanks!
Thank you all for taking the time to read and reply. Your candour is appreciated.
@Devor - Thank you for your advice and encouragement. I am of the mentality that a paragraph written properly (and let's hope I got at least a few of those in my 60k) is another step towards the elusive...
Hello,
I have been a long time lurker, as the saying goes. I have created this account to ask any one of you intelligent ladies and gents (the ole' flattery approach) who have experience in writing or reading fantasy for a piece of advice.
Just under half of my first piece of fantasy...