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Thank you so much for taking the time to read this and share your thoughts! I really appreciate the comparisons Kingdom Hearts, Final Fantasy, Zelda… those are powerful mythic openings, and it means a lot that the tone reminded you of them. This version of the prologue was intentionally written...

Thank you so much that truly means a lot. This story has lived in me for a long time, and hearing that the idea already feels alive to you… that’s the kind of encouragement that keeps me going. Here’s a tiny glimpse from inside the world itself just a single heartbeat of the tale: “The echo...

Thank you so much that truly means more than you know. I wrote that opening during a time when I was trying to understand my own “echoes,” so hearing that it resonated with you… that’s a gift. I’m building a world where even a whisper can shape a destiny, so every bit of connection reminds me...

Thanks 😊 I will

This is the idea for my book. Every soul carries a quiet place, a room where thoughts become voices, and voices become choices. Some call it instinct. Some call it conscience. But in truth, it is a fragile echo, a whisper powerful enough to build a life or break a world. Now imagine a realm...

You are correct and it does, would you like to see the opening I am working on?

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Here it is let me know what you guys think. Synopsis: In a world once united by light, the Obsidian Heart an ancient force of creation and corruption awakens to plunge the realms into chaos. When a kingdom falls overnight and a hero succumbs to darkness, two souls rise from the ashes: Nael ...

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Hello fellow writers, I’m new here, so please forgive me if I stumble through this a bit. I’m a disabled veteran of the U.S. Navy, and after years of carrying an idea in my mind, I’ve finally begun writing the fantasy story that’s lived in me since I was young. This project means a lot not...