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    Talk about the framework of your magic system

    Magic will tire you out, and you when try a tier for the first time, you will be on your knees in exhaustion in my system, but unlike breathing, it won't kill you. Outdoing yourself can push you to the verge of death, but it can't kill you
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    Talk about the framework of your magic system

    Magic will tire you out, and you when try a tier for the first time, you will be on your knees in exhaustion in my system, but unlike breathing, it won't kill you. Outdoing yourself can push you to the verge of death, but it can't kill you
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    Talk about the framework of your magic system

    1) In Valanya, magic is obtained simply by consuming a certain metal, and this enhances you in a way that if I were to explain, it would ruin the book I'm writing with it in. It DOES have an easy explanation, and can be linked to science and where exactly it's origin is. 2) Rules? I take the...
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    Valanya- Map, Culture, Religions and Empires/Kingdoms to be added soon!

    Oh, I've found a way, to find it out read the finished book :P
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    Valanya- Map, Culture, Religions and Empires/Kingdoms to be added soon!

    You don't eat it as such, you swallow it in the same way you might swallow a medicinal tablet; in a single gulp, in small amounts, and you don't really taste it (the time that it's made also affects beadmaegen, with twilight giving the best results). The idea for the series though is that magic...
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    Valanya- Map, Culture, Religions and Empires/Kingdoms to be added soon!

    I have, but instead of the constant stream of metal that Mistborn/Mistings require in his series, this is a one-off, but I have used many of his concepts mixed in with mine and a few others :P
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    Valanya- Map, Culture, Religions and Empires/Kingdoms to be added soon!

    The plot orbits around the creation of Beadmaegen; for hundreds of years, Adfyr and Isgebind were both used in perfect balance, and now a Third Form has been found, and the race is on to become Powerforms for the different Empires and Kingdoms, and also exploring this strange new creation...
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    Valanya- Map, Culture, Religions and Empires/Kingdoms to be added soon!

    Magic system for this book I might write is as follows, constructive criticism would be much appreciated: Magic, as a whole, is divided into 3 forms: Fireform, Iceform, and Powerform Fireform can be obtained by swallowing a piece of Adfyr, a metal that can be mined. Once obtained, your...
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