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    Can I get some feedback on a short story?

    Thanks! I've been keeping this as a secret for so much time that is good to know that I'm on the right way. About the illustrations, my plan is to create a "catalog' of each one of them. Hidrios' page would be like this: Next page would be Helis, Lit and so on. About the vocabulary, this...
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    Can I get some feedback on a short story?

    Hey guys, I just discovered this community. It's amazing! I wish I had found it before. I'd like some feedback on something I have been working on. I created characters based on the chemical elements, where real properties are their abilities. With that, I created short stories for each one of...
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