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    Creating a believable villain

    HIMDogson Killmonger works because he has the same targets as T'Challa. But he doesn't want to hide Wakanda.
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    Creating a believable villain

    Ok. Villains are art for itself. I mean, a boring villain doesn't entertain! But villains haven't to be always human. I mean, look at Jurassic Park, there the villains are the raptors or even nature itself. In the Lunar Chronicles there is an evil queen but also a virus, which is kinda plague...
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    Creating compelling and interesting stakes

    Well. Let's say your story's about a woman, who wants to make dinner. There you can write a lot about. But the basics stakes are: 1. Looking for a recipe 2. Go shopping 3. Making dinner 4. Serve it. Sounds boring, huh? But how about a hostage-taking during shopping? Or that the house burns...
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    What is a realm?

    A realm is a dimension. At least, in the Norse mythology. Here is Midgard the earth. And Asgard is the REALM of the gods.
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    Sci fi vs. Fantasy – what’s the difference

    pmmg I wouldn't suggest that mythology is fantasy. Ok. It's from the human mind. But often fantasy steals stuff for its own stories. Greek mythology was originally a RELIGION.
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    How to describe something in the shortest way possible

    I would write: The dude support Kevin. He took Kevin’s arm and put it around his neck. Oh! Hopefully, there was no hot chick. It's so embarrassing!, Kevin hobbled. He shouldn't have skated that handrail along. What has it brought? Right. Nothing but a broken leg. Great! So much about becoming...
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    Creating compelling and interesting stakes

    Well. I think it matters, which story structure you use. Are use using the Hero’s Journey? Then, it isn't such easy but it's possible. Just think of Harry Potter and compare it with Percy Jackson. Harry has Dumbledore as a Mentor, Percy has Chiron as his mentor. In the film, it's the same! While...
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    Sci fi vs. Fantasy – what’s the difference

    Maybe you have chosen this topic during a debate with friends, too. – What’s the difference between fantasy and science fiction? Or is science fiction even a sub-genre of fantasy? MY answer to the 2nd questions is: NOPE, it isn’t it. Fantasy Ok. – What’s, in my opinion, fantasy? Of course...
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    Creating mood/atmosphere?

    Firefly Actually, it's ridiculous to be bitten by a poodle. But it was just an example.
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    Creating mood/atmosphere?

    Firefly Ok. I checked it so far. But how about the setting? Hogwarts has a different mood and atmosphere than the St. Vladimir Academy from the book Vampire Academy. I mean, it's a different mood if my character run away from a poodle instead of a serial killer. (Ok. It would be more or less the...
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    Is the 3rd limited POV just a synonym for the deep POV?

    Is 3rd limited POV just a synonym for the deep point of view? Little real-life story: When I sat in my English lessons, my English teacher repeated the Point of view. I wondered why she didn’t write the deep POV on the blackboard. I mean, (ok. It’s a newer one. But hey!) many bestsellers were...
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    English language limits

    Firefly Yeah. I wanted reason with that. But she treats English as if there wouldn't be any slang. Well... When I'm speaking, I use an eastern British accent. And guess what! My English teacher said it would be wrong. Sorry that I don't use the Oxford accent. Nobody – except English learners...
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    English language limits

    pmmg That American friends thinks you write it on the weekend. But I know, the formal British English uses at the weekend. She doesn't still want to believe me that I'm right. I learned in school that we should use at, not on. On is the American way. However, in Germany, we aren’t allowed to use...
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    Creating mood/atmosphere?

    Hey, guys! Bestseller novels have a fit mood. Why should a horror story have a happy mood? Why should a comedy story have a dramatic atmosphere? It doesn’t fit! But how do you create one? I mean, I can describe my character’s face or the weather around him, it doesn’t create a mood, which can...
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    Writing better Horror Stories

    Chessie2 xD
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