BWFoster78

Trick,

I don't really frequent this forum much any more. Feel free to email me a short piece at author @ brianwfoster.com

Hello BWFoster78,

I just posted a very small piece on the showcase and would really appreciate a critique from you. Via your blog, I downloaded, read and commented on your novelette Abuse of Power a while back and have seen your critiques here and on your blog.

I need your brand of honesty on my style and... everything really. The post is called 'A spur of the moment story 625 WC.' It's not my best as you can guess by the title but it still represents how I write pretty well and I'm at a point where vague comments don't cut it.

If you have the time, I'd be very appreciative.