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  1. Excerpts from Stan for Critiquing

    Stan the Barbarian: Robbery Scene (Part 2)

    (Note: I am including the introduction I posted in the forum's here to set up this excerpt. The part of chapter 2 I am asking to be critiqued is attached as a file as it exceed the character count. It is roughly 15k characters This is from the second chapter of my Sword & Sorcery/Epic Fantasy...
    • J Q Kaiser
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    • 7 min read
    • accent barbarian dialect epic fantasy humor sword and sorcery
    • Category: Book Chapters
  2. Excerpts from Stan for Critiquing

    Stan the Barbarian: Robbery Scene (Part 1)

    (Note: I am including the introduction I posted in the forum's here to set up this excerpt. The part of chapter 2 I am asking to be critiqued is attached as a file as it exceed the character count. It is roughly 15k characters This is from the second chapter of my Sword & Sorcery/Epic Fantasy...
    • J Q Kaiser
    • Portfolio entry
    • 6 min read
    • accent barbarian dialect epic fantasy humor sword and sorcery
    • Category: Book Chapters
  3. Excerpts from Stan for Critiquing

    Excerpts from Stan for Critiquing

    This is a place where I will post parts of Stan for critiques (as the forum is a bit too limiting, word count wise). Much of this will involve dialogue scenes, which tend to frustrate me. Your constructive comments and criticisms will be appreciated. Thank you in advance for your feedback.
    • J Q Kaiser
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    • barbarian epic fantasy fiction sword and sorcery
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