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character writing

  1. Naruzeldamaster

    When I request feedback, would it be helpful to note when a character goes 'off script' ?

    I know I've mentioned this a few times in different threads, that when I let my characters 'be themselves' as per advise from some of you lot, they tend to go 'off script' a lot, yet still they somehow remain perfectly in character. I just wonder if that information would be helpful in...
  2. Naruzeldamaster

    How to write this kind of villain without uhh...writing this kind of villain. (if that makes sense)

    Video Title: When you start a new game and meet a character you know is going to betray you. I figured the prozd skit would be more accurate depiction of what I want to avoid than a four or five paragraph essay this time lol And yes, this does happen quite often, at least in JRPGs, though it...
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