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Hello all, I am currently in the process of writing my first novel. It has been brewing in me for a long time, and a recent development gave me time to think. Now I want to give this a real chance. I plan on adding in this post the first draft of my first two chapters and would appreciate...

I saw a post by sgbii with their map which has a lot of interesting feedback, so I thought I'd throw mine in here too, to see what you all think. I made the map with INKARNATE MAP (REDDIT)

There used to be a whole pantheon of gods, but one day, nobody knows how, the gods themselves died. Now, on mount olympus, the corpses of the gods lay dead and decaying, horrible insects grow fat off of their flesh, the blood of the gods fueling their power as the monsters known as fames. The...

Hello! I recently finished a fantasy short story, and I would like to get some feedback on it, but the problem is I don't know how I should get them. I already posted my work on Reddit, a discord group, without any feedback. I am not a native English speaker and don't live in an...

I have a story that, so far, has two chosen ones. Neither was created naturally; one by cult ritual and the other by specific experimental breeding of a part-angel human and a part-devil human. Essentially, the one created by ritual (D) was raised to be the messiah for the isolated cult he...

Hello! I used to use these forums years ago, though I lost my original username and the email associated with it. I recently got back into writing, and I'm going back to a story I've worked with on and off for a few years. I'm working on the magic system for my story, and I was hoping I could...

Hi! Is anyone interested in critiquing my work? Mostly for grammar and punctuation errors. Also, I need a reader's perspective while reading the chapters, i.e. if it's boring, unclear, or interesting. There's 10 chapters and each chapter has 700 - 1000 words (mostly 700). Although, the problem...

Hi, I'm new to Mythic Scribes and, as a young author, I am trying to write my first novel. Genre: Fantasy. I have always really enjoyed reading fantasy novels, and would love to know if anyone has written a fantasy novel before? I'm really enjoying the process so far, but I'm not sure I'm doing...

What is the principle or method behind beta reader swaps?