suspense

Please give this a quick read and provide some constructive criticism, this is my first medieval fantasy and I'm willing to learn. Thank you so much!!! This is the first short chapter of a book idea I have. Chapter One. The tower creaked like an old lung, breathing against the gray breath of...

I want one of my scenes, a tet-a-tet between two characters, in which there is a huge power imbalance (one of them is a literal god), to feel as tense as possible. There should be a constant threat, a feeling that at any moment the conversation could turn sideways and the God could obliterate...