Laurence
Inkling
In Writing Excuses S12E11: Diction, Mary mentions that most alliteration, particularly accidental, is seriously distracting.
What do you think makes alliteration use in fantasy work or not work? Any sweet examples?
Do you edit out all/accidental alliteration in your first draft?
What do you think makes alliteration use in fantasy work or not work? Any sweet examples?
Do you edit out all/accidental alliteration in your first draft?