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Asking on system?

So I want to write a story. I am thinking of a power system. But I was thinking of using gu as the medium for usage of power. Gus were the main medium of power usage in the world of reverend insanity. But I was thinking of creating something different like how power is used. Like if you have read reverend insanity, you know how the power is used, but I am thinking of creating a different ecosystem, although concepts like perseverance gu and things will remain the same. But I am not sure if it is correct to use or not. So want to ask abt the opinion of people here.
 

Queshire

Istar
I know -of- Reverend Insanity, but I'm afraid I haven't read it. I know it's well known enough in certain circles that you might want to change the name from Gu to something else though.
 
I know -of- Reverend Insanity, but I'm afraid I haven't read it. I know it's well known enough in certain circles that you might want to change the name from Gu to something else though.
I was thinking of using insects or creature or something like that, but I thought just in case if it is possible
 

Queshire

Istar
Well you should always aim to put your own spin on things of course, but there's plenty of stories that use cultivation systems or bind spirits.
 

pmmg

Myth Weaver
Seems complex, and I have not encountered it elsewhere. I suspect if I knew it, I would know the source and that would impact my assessment of your creativity...but ideas are not protected. I dont think you would get in any legal trouble with it, unless it was a complete theft.
 
Seems complex, and I have not encountered it elsewhere. I suspect if I knew it, I would know the source and that would impact my assessment of your creativity...but ideas are not protected. I dont think you would get in any legal trouble with it, unless it was a complete theft.
yeah, that is the issue. That is why I am not comfortable with using gu. But like you said, the complexity is what makes the power system lovable. It is the reason the power system is much better than any other power system i have ever seen. And because the power system is complex, you can create quite a new power system by using the base, but then the creativity is lost.
 
Well you should always aim to put your own spin on things of course, but there's plenty of stories that use cultivation systems or bind spirits.
hm, but the kind of story that I want to write is different. And I don't want to use cultivation system, which every novel uses. That in itself decrease the novelty of the novel. Well, feels like I need to create a new power system only.
 

ThinkerX

Myth Weaver
I have not read 'Reverend Insanity,' but the concept reminds me of the webnovel 'The Wandering Inn,' a sort of RPG fantasy featuring classes and levels. 'The Wandering Inn' topped several million words, with weekly additions.
 
I have not read 'Reverend Insanity,' but the concept reminds me of the webnovel 'The Wandering Inn,' a sort of RPG fantasy featuring classes and levels. 'The Wandering Inn' topped several million words, with weekly additions.
I have no idea about wandering inn, but reverend insanity has been one of the top 3 best webnovels. But in any case, it seems I have to find another way to present the story, while making sure it has novelty.
 

MSadiq

Minstrel
I have no idea about wandering inn, but reverend insanity has been one of the top 3 best webnovels. But in any case, it seems I have to find another way to present the story, while making sure it has novelty.
If you're seeking novelty, add your spin on the power system. Take it and interpret it through something you really love. In my power system, which is an elemental one, etymology, semantics, and perception are important to how powers manifest, so if a character truly believes that swinging his arm when throwing a fireball makes it faster and stronger, it'll be faster and stronger.

I took the elemental power system and infused it with my passion for linguistics. Do the something similar. Your passion meets gu.
 

ThinkerX

Myth Weaver
I have no idea about wandering inn, but reverend insanity has been one of the top 3 best webnovels. But in any case, it seems I have to find another way to present the story, while making sure it has novelty.
'The Wandering Inn' is a serial webnovel with a substantial following. It seems somewhat like what you intend.
 
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