Addison
Auror
This is mostly a question of character background. I don't know what the deal is with my MC, or me, but his family keeps changing. In each variation he stills has a cute baby sister, a lazy, obnoxious older brother, a domineering, slave-driving....adult (his title in family is changing from step-father, fiance, guardian and mom's boyfriend and landlord) A mother and a possibly late father. Yea, it's crazy. The main problem is the parents. In the original version the mom is alive and the dad is dead. Dead-dead. But then when I looked at the character through the story the dead-father wasn't sitting well with his attitude, his personality. So that mother-father-child relationship has gone all over the place. From omitting the slave driver as an extra person to making it a complex mystery. Son thought dad was dead, dad thought son and wife were dead, both are still alive. Dad's alive but has amnesia. Dad left them to give them a better chance away from his life.
Any tips on getting this sorted will be greatly appreciated.
And before anyone asks, yes I've written down each scenario. I've written family background for my other characters.
Any tips on getting this sorted will be greatly appreciated.
And before anyone asks, yes I've written down each scenario. I've written family background for my other characters.