Gryphos
Auror
For a project I've been working on for literally shitloads of time, I opted to use 3rd person omniscient, since the novel consists of four main characters travelling in a group who I want to be able to get in the heads of.
But now I'm worried that the way I've executed this might be considered head-hopping, and I want to avoid giving the reader 'whiplash' as it were. Does anyone here have any experience with writing omniscient who could share any wisdom as to how to smooth the transition between different characters' thoughts?
But now I'm worried that the way I've executed this might be considered head-hopping, and I want to avoid giving the reader 'whiplash' as it were. Does anyone here have any experience with writing omniscient who could share any wisdom as to how to smooth the transition between different characters' thoughts?