Shanatos
Dreamer
My thought isn't necessarily having too many perspectives, but splitting the action too much.
Like, is each of these characters having their own different sub-plot? That's where it gets too complicated. But if you have one event happening, but shift the POV to many different characters following the same action, that is less problematic.
Like, is each of these characters having their own different sub-plot? That's where it gets too complicated. But if you have one event happening, but shift the POV to many different characters following the same action, that is less problematic.