Hir i-Chorvath
Auror
Ok, so I have a bit of a problem with the story that I'm working on right now and I have two main things that I need help with.
Quick background info: This is taking place on a ship during/after a battle where the MC's ship was defeated and they have been taken prisoners. (I can elaborate on this if it's needed)
Question 1: The first mate of my ship is female and they just got captured by a crew of pirates. I don't want to get into the typical stuff that usually happens in that kind of setting and I don't want it to happen to her. So...ideas? I didn't plan on the pirates having the greatest morals but I really don't want to write that type of thing or imply it. Would it be believable if I gave the pirates that scrap of honour so that they wouldn't treat her that way? She is the type of person that would be thoroughly against the whole thing.
(On this world/area pirates are generally outcasts from their respective homes because they lacked the specific qualities that are wanted, such as calm, cool-headed, methodical, etc. I can go into this more if it's needed but it isn't overly related.)
Question 2: My MC in the story, (a sea elf called Rathalas) has PTSD or as I like to call it, a personalized phobia, because of an experience that he had with a certain pirate (a Teifling called Rezimer) a few years before the incident where Rezimer tried to whip him to death. Rathalas survived but with bad scars and is now technically crippled though he refuses to admit it. Since that experience, he can't stand being around whips, and seeing someone getting whipped has him in a panic attack. Rathalas has trouble sleeping at night because of the nightmares and is a heavy alcoholic, (though by the time the story starts he is trying to quit) Now this whole time Rathalas has been told that Rezimer was dead and Rezimer is very much not dead. When they get captured by the pirates, Rezimer is there and seeks him out (He has a grudge against Rathalas which I can elaborate on if needed (also his being on the ship is not a coincidence)) So my question is what would be Rathalas' reaction if he suddenly sees Rezimer alive and he has problems with things that just remind him of Rezimer? What is his reaction going to be to actually seeing Rezimer and being forced into contact with him?
Again, I can elaborate or clarify any points that need it, and thank you so much for taking the time to read this!
EDIT: I just realized that this probably should have gone in "Brainstorming and Planning". Oops.
Quick background info: This is taking place on a ship during/after a battle where the MC's ship was defeated and they have been taken prisoners. (I can elaborate on this if it's needed)
Question 1: The first mate of my ship is female and they just got captured by a crew of pirates. I don't want to get into the typical stuff that usually happens in that kind of setting and I don't want it to happen to her. So...ideas? I didn't plan on the pirates having the greatest morals but I really don't want to write that type of thing or imply it. Would it be believable if I gave the pirates that scrap of honour so that they wouldn't treat her that way? She is the type of person that would be thoroughly against the whole thing.
(On this world/area pirates are generally outcasts from their respective homes because they lacked the specific qualities that are wanted, such as calm, cool-headed, methodical, etc. I can go into this more if it's needed but it isn't overly related.)
Question 2: My MC in the story, (a sea elf called Rathalas) has PTSD or as I like to call it, a personalized phobia, because of an experience that he had with a certain pirate (a Teifling called Rezimer) a few years before the incident where Rezimer tried to whip him to death. Rathalas survived but with bad scars and is now technically crippled though he refuses to admit it. Since that experience, he can't stand being around whips, and seeing someone getting whipped has him in a panic attack. Rathalas has trouble sleeping at night because of the nightmares and is a heavy alcoholic, (though by the time the story starts he is trying to quit) Now this whole time Rathalas has been told that Rezimer was dead and Rezimer is very much not dead. When they get captured by the pirates, Rezimer is there and seeks him out (He has a grudge against Rathalas which I can elaborate on if needed (also his being on the ship is not a coincidence)) So my question is what would be Rathalas' reaction if he suddenly sees Rezimer alive and he has problems with things that just remind him of Rezimer? What is his reaction going to be to actually seeing Rezimer and being forced into contact with him?
Again, I can elaborate or clarify any points that need it, and thank you so much for taking the time to read this!
EDIT: I just realized that this probably should have gone in "Brainstorming and Planning". Oops.
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