SampsonO'Ryan
Acolyte
Hi my name is Sampson O'Ryan. I have a book coming out this winter. I received a book deal through Fulton Books Inc. The title of my book is called project Archangels. Hope u enjoy this free sample.Project Archangels
Ya, that is an unedited manuscript. Fulton Books is my Editor publisher and distributor. If u actually read the content of the story I think u would have had a better time. My book comes out Barnes and Noble this Christmas. Have a good dayI don't think Fulton Books is a publisher. They are a service. Are you paying them to get your book published?
Reading the sample that you posted, I do not believe you are ready to be a published author. There are many issues with grammar and punctuation. Stuff that would never get you past a slush pile. While I encourage you to keep at it, I think you have a journey into craft before you are ready to hit a market.
Just two examples from the text....
"Is everything o.k. Molly?" I replied.
o.k. is text speak. The actual word is Okay. OK or O.K. if you want the shorthand.
"Yo teach." "You're late". One of my students named Michael yelled.
I don't like any of this sentence. Quotes are not meant to be used in that manner, two phrases butted up against each other. And the attribution is shoe-horned in to force the students name into the sentence. Does the student even matter? it could be just a voice in the crowd.
"Yo, Teach," yelled one of my students. "You're late." It was Michael.
The whole second chapter is one giant paragraph? Probably a formatting issue, but is that how you want to appear before the public?
To pick up on another thread, I did not see where the time travel paradox was answered, and I don't feel I had my mind blown. I personally have never tried DMT, but its on my bucket list. Maybe that would blow my mind.
I understand that it was unedited. Try reading it the way it is and enjoy it. I made past the slush pile brother. U can buy it on Amazon or apple if u desire.Ya, that is an unedited manuscript. Fulton Books is my Editor publisher and distributor. If u actually read the content of the story I think u would have had a better time. My book comes out Barnes and Noble this Christmas. Have a good day
You're the best!I know what I’m getting pmmg for Christmas.
You mean going through a vanity press?Does anyone know if any author ever made it this way?
You mean going through a vanity press?
Like I said, D2D would have been a far better way to go. 200 page book, author copies about $5 each, retail price $14-15. Sell to bookstores for $10 or $11. Maybe rent a spot at a community market and try peddling the books direct.I'll publish ANY book for $99.99! Contact me at...