Sorgin world building

[Yunona Anthanasko]

Hello everyone, I am new to this platfrom and I can't wait to explain some part about my world building.
First let me explain a part of it and see you feedback and I need comformation if its worthy, I will discuss what they are and some blood types related topics.


World building 1 attmpt:

Relations with non magics

Sorgin society is in a secret socity and most of them have heard about non magic people but they just mostly do not care about them, there are what would non magics call witches and wizards of even warlocks but for sorigons it is considerd as a some type of soft slur in a way that if you call them one of these names they would be offended because of Saleam witch trails they are pretty familiar with, they did not get magic from any type of non natural way.

Blood types:
Neliffe- non Sorgins

Bloodkomin- these people have only sorgin ancestors in last 10 generations

Gulfblood(Gulf's)- they have neliffes in last 10 generations but are still "too pure" to be considred Halmaturks

Halmaturks- one of parents is eighter neliffe or there were a lot of them in the past

Maturlus- very little to no powers at all

Luifts(luiftblooded)- sogrin and other magical being (for ex. vampire)
P.S you are related to someone till 10th generation in Sorgin society

IF you intereted in more of my lore please tell me, I have a lot more to say this is just the beggining of a much larger universe and story, I will if at least 1 person comments anything about this and if anybody tells me if this thing has at least a bit of potential.

 

[pmmg]

Howdy Yunona, welcome here.

I dont care about them either.

Since you brought up Salem, are these people hiding somehow in the edges of our own world? What kind of story would you want to tell? Would the MC be people with magic abilities? Or people without?

 

[ThinkerX]

I find your explanation confusing.

Are these 'Sorgin' a secret society of hereditary magicians dwelling among other types of people who may or may not have magical ability?

If so, why the secrecy?

Do the other magic users have abilities that the Sorgin do not?

Do the Sorgin rule this nation? Or is some other group in charge?

 

[Yunona Anthanasko]

Howdy Yunona, welcome here.

I dont care about them either.

Since you brought up Salem, are these people hiding somehow in the edges of our own world? What kind of story would you want to tell? Would the MC be people with magic abilities? Or people

I find your explanation confusing.

Are these 'Sorgin' a secret society of hereditary magicians dwelling among other types of people who may or may not have magical ability?

If so, why the secrecy?

Do the other magic users have abilities that the Sorgin do not?

Do the Sorgin rule this nation? Or is some other group in charge?

Thank you for commenting, well Sorgins can live among non Sorgin groupes(regular people) but they live in their secret society and they speak the languge and have culture of that country on some level ofc they have some of their own cultural stuff. Think of them as separate groupe or comunity, like amish people are. But non Sorgons don't know about tham that much due to the fact that people just because they don't care. Sorgins really don't take much effort to hide people already don't notice them. This whole thing takes place on earth and in regular world. But they indeed have their hidden citys metropoles and villiges. Sorry for late replay I did not think people would notice this post.

 

[Kassandra]

Hello Yunona.
I also have questions.

If Sorgins don't try to hide, or don't care to hide from normal people, then their community shouldn't be considered "hidden," I think.
Perhaps it'd be interesting if you did make them hiding, for some reason. Or, maybe they're located far away from people (something similar to Agartha - myth involving cities inside the Earth's core. I google searched this, but this is just a suggestion.)
It sounds very simple to say "people don't care" - considering that curiosity is part of a person's nature. Perhaps there are myths in human history about them, but they haven't been able to find out more about them or to locate them.

So, are the Neliffe the normal humans (who don't have any magic)?

Since you're separating your races by blood, does that mean that there is an appointed person to keep a record for the blood lines of each person? (it's different to know "oh, we had Neliffe ancestors in the distant past," and "oh, we've had Neliffe ancestors for the last 9 generations") It's very specific, so I assume everyone keeps a big book on these matters?

Do the Sorgins have their own political system? Aren't Maturlus (the ones with no power at all) the same as Neliffe?
Is each race/bloodline treated differently in the Sorgin world?

 

[minta]

Welcome here, Yunona!

I think your concept has potential! I'm curious: how do the different blood types affect a person’s abilities or status in society? Are some blood types more powerful or respected than others?

 

[Yunona Anthanasko]

I find your explanation confusing.

Are these 'Sorgin' a secret society of hereditary magicians dwelling among other types of people who may or may not have magical ability?

If so, why the secrecy?

Do the other magic users have abilities that the Sorgin do not?

Do the Sorgin rule this nation? Or is some other group in charge?

Howdy Yunona, welcome here.

Howdy Yunona, welcome here.

I dont care about them either.

Since you brought up Salem, are these people hiding somehow in the edges of our own world? What kind of story would you want to tell? Would the MC be people with magic abilities? Or people without?

I find your explanation confusing.

Are these 'Sorgin' a secret society of hereditary magicians dwelling among other types of people who may or may not have magical ability?

If so, why the secrecy?

Do the other magic users have abilities that the Sorgin do not?

Do the Sorgin rule this nation? Or is some other group in charge?

Howdy Yunona, welcome here.

I dont care about them either.

Since you brought up Salem, are these people hiding somehow in the edges of our own world? What kind of story would you want to tell? Would the MC be people with magic abilities? Or people without?

I dont care about them either.

Since you brought up Salem, are these people hiding somehow in the edges of our own world? What kind of story would you want to tell? Would the MC be people with magic abilities? Or people without

Howdy Yunona, welcome here.

I dont care about them either.

Since you brought up Salem, are these people hiding somehow in the edges of our own world? What kind of story would you want to tell? Would the MC be people with magic abilities? Or people without?

Howdy Yunona, welcome here.

I dont care about them either.

Since you brought up Salem, are these people hiding somehow in the edges of our own world? What kind of story would you want to tell? Would the MC be people with magic abilities? Or people without?

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Howdy Yunona, welcome here.

I dont care about them either.

Since you brought up Salem, are these people hiding somehow in the edges of our own world? What kind of story would you want to tell? Would the MC be people with magic abilities? Or people without?

Thank you for your comment!

Howdy Yunona, welcome here.

I dont care about them either.

Since you brought up Salem, are these people hiding somehow in the edges of our own world? What kind of story would you want to tell? Would the MC be people with magic abilities? Or people without?

Ty for commenting I will try to be more active I have not expected for people to notice this. They live on Earth but yes they mostly hide from regular people but there are Sorgins that live in neliffes world just fine. MC will be gulfblood maybe, (don't want to spoil much hehe). But he will be friend with person who is enifolk-person who has no sorgin ancestor what so ever but posseses the potential of Sorgins and has same abilities sometimes with 0 "symphtoms" not every neliffa is Sorgin but some are, some never find out but some do. He will be importan for story and will help reader undrstand stuff better. if you have any other question please ask. Also this is in very early development so some thing might change

 

[Yunona Anthanasko]

THANK YOU EVERYONE FOR COMMENTING! I DID NOT EXPECT THIS. The replayes might take some time I need some time to think since I have not been doing anything about this for a while but I plan on coming back with fresh replyes and less confusing, thank you again.