Ireth
Myth Weaver
I was looking over the first chapter of a story just now, and I noticed that in the narration, the protagonist refers to his mother as just "his mother" for the most part, but he tends to refer to his father by his proper name more often than not. This was unintentional, and to me it looks sloppy and inconsistent. I don't really like the idea of a character referring to his parents by their first names even if he is an adult himself, but just saying "his mother/his father" all the time would get tiresome. Should I stick with one or the other, or keep the names and descriptors balanced?