Jeremiah Reed
Dreamer
I thought I'd get some feedback on one of the bigger aspects of my fantasy world, the Great Hunt.
A little background: The kingdom in my story is based around 14th century France, set in a heavily forested area rife with monsters and beast-men. The majority of the populace live behind the safety of walled castle-cities ruled by feudal lords. These castle-cities, while united in name, largely act independently. Even competing with one another for resources.
The nobles, seeking glory, often go out on long hunting expeditions deep into the forests. The greater the beast slain, the greater the favor of their liege lord. Many of the noble families in the story can trace their lineage back to an ancestor who slew a manticore, griffin, or some other great beast.
I want the world to truly reflect a society centered around slaying great beasts. These hunting trips are massive, resembling military campaigns with hundreds of knights, men-at-arms, and levies. Their armors are covered in paints, fabrics, or even enamel to both protect the metal from the elements and as a flashy decoration. Knights are seen wielding pronged boar-spears more often than swords.
I'll post more, if anyone is interested. I'm still fleshing it out, a bit, so I'll welcome any feedback that will help.
A little background: The kingdom in my story is based around 14th century France, set in a heavily forested area rife with monsters and beast-men. The majority of the populace live behind the safety of walled castle-cities ruled by feudal lords. These castle-cities, while united in name, largely act independently. Even competing with one another for resources.
The nobles, seeking glory, often go out on long hunting expeditions deep into the forests. The greater the beast slain, the greater the favor of their liege lord. Many of the noble families in the story can trace their lineage back to an ancestor who slew a manticore, griffin, or some other great beast.
I want the world to truly reflect a society centered around slaying great beasts. These hunting trips are massive, resembling military campaigns with hundreds of knights, men-at-arms, and levies. Their armors are covered in paints, fabrics, or even enamel to both protect the metal from the elements and as a flashy decoration. Knights are seen wielding pronged boar-spears more often than swords.
I'll post more, if anyone is interested. I'm still fleshing it out, a bit, so I'll welcome any feedback that will help.
Istar
Myth Weaver