Finchbearer
Istar
So I have built a character that I’m really pleased with in terms of how he fits into my epic fantasy story, however, he is what I would describe as complex, and the skill in conveying him as a likeable character is incredibly important because he becomes a love interest with one of my protags.
His trope is probably something like ‘the troubled genius’, but to be more concise:
* He is a nobleman who comes from a long line of warriors, and so his father and elder brother expected him to become a warrior too - however along with having the (magical) gift of the cypher, he instead showed great intellectual strength rather than physical, but is often made to feel inferior or like a failure in the eyes of his father and elder brother, because he’s different.
* He is an heir to a ruling position of his province, and since his father and brother are always away, he stays and holds court and attends council meetings with other nobles. That’s a lot of pressure.
* There are kidnappings that occur in my world to mages (that I call dryġe) and it is assumed that it is to somehow take their (magical) gift by force. This characters previous love interest was kidnapped a long time ago, yet he is left with trauma causing shakes and rumination whenever the subject is raised, but he hides it well, though it is becoming more difficult to hide as more kidnappings occur in the timeline that the story is told.
* He is a nobleman, and is used to luxury, and is renowned for holding amazing courtly events, which includes a decadent side to his personality. He’s attractive and is aware of this.
* He often takes one or two of his favoured courtesans to court events to evade offers of marriage from eligible nobleman’s daughters, and also only engages in sex with courtesans, until my main character comes along that is. The female main character who he falls in love with is from a peasant background, and is a dryġe too now so there is a social divide as it frowned upon for nobles to mix in this way with lower classes.
* he was a sorcerers apprentice and is now a master of the dark arts.
* There will be a war in my storyline, and he defeats the opposition by using his non-warrior skills, and eventually becomes the first King of this country.
* He and my female protagonist become King and Queen.
What do you like/ dislike?
Any problems you can see?
Do you think this character profile is strong/ weak?
Unfavourable to an audience?
What could be added or taken away?
Overall impression?
My thoughts are that I want him to be a memorable character that readers will enjoy reading about, and I want the reader to be happy that he has eventually found love.
Nervous sharing this one because he has been in my mind for a while.
His trope is probably something like ‘the troubled genius’, but to be more concise:
* He is a nobleman who comes from a long line of warriors, and so his father and elder brother expected him to become a warrior too - however along with having the (magical) gift of the cypher, he instead showed great intellectual strength rather than physical, but is often made to feel inferior or like a failure in the eyes of his father and elder brother, because he’s different.
* He is an heir to a ruling position of his province, and since his father and brother are always away, he stays and holds court and attends council meetings with other nobles. That’s a lot of pressure.
* There are kidnappings that occur in my world to mages (that I call dryġe) and it is assumed that it is to somehow take their (magical) gift by force. This characters previous love interest was kidnapped a long time ago, yet he is left with trauma causing shakes and rumination whenever the subject is raised, but he hides it well, though it is becoming more difficult to hide as more kidnappings occur in the timeline that the story is told.
* He is a nobleman, and is used to luxury, and is renowned for holding amazing courtly events, which includes a decadent side to his personality. He’s attractive and is aware of this.
* He often takes one or two of his favoured courtesans to court events to evade offers of marriage from eligible nobleman’s daughters, and also only engages in sex with courtesans, until my main character comes along that is. The female main character who he falls in love with is from a peasant background, and is a dryġe too now so there is a social divide as it frowned upon for nobles to mix in this way with lower classes.
* he was a sorcerers apprentice and is now a master of the dark arts.
* There will be a war in my storyline, and he defeats the opposition by using his non-warrior skills, and eventually becomes the first King of this country.
* He and my female protagonist become King and Queen.
What do you like/ dislike?
Any problems you can see?
Do you think this character profile is strong/ weak?
Unfavourable to an audience?
What could be added or taken away?
Overall impression?
My thoughts are that I want him to be a memorable character that readers will enjoy reading about, and I want the reader to be happy that he has eventually found love.
Nervous sharing this one because he has been in my mind for a while.