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  • RoccO
    RoccO replied to the thread Pinocchio.
    I was musing. The puppet came into the story as a backdrop for plotline. I had the idea sort of roll around in my head as a strategy...
  • Naruzeldamaster
    Roger, I feel like Close third is too close so I might go omniscient but then I'll have to look up some good examples of that to get me...
  • pmmg
    pmmg replied to the thread hello!.
    Howdy S Juli, Welcome here.
  • pmmg
    pmmg replied to the thread New Member Here.
    Howdy Samuel, welcome here.
  • pmmg
    pmmg replied to the thread Pinocchio.
    Is this trying to follow the life of someone in the Bible? The place names are somewhat biblical. Are you asking why the puppet would...
  • Adam Scribentis
    Adam Scribentis replied to the thread Hello fellow scribes!.
    Hello!
  • Adam Scribentis
    Adam Scribentis replied to the thread hello!.
    Greetings!
  • RoccO
    RoccO posted the thread Pinocchio in World Building.
    I had been trying to work my wooden boy into my fiction WIP. It is about magical animals that the Eden Corporation hunts down stopped by...
  • Mad Swede
    Mad Swede replied to the thread Is "Head Hopping" Good or Bad?.
    Right, then you're NOT head hopping. What you are guilty of is not choosing a point of view style and then sticking to it. In your...
  • Incanus
    Incanus replied to the thread Is "Head Hopping" Good or Bad?.
    In my view, there is no such thing as an 'in-between' POV--much in the same way that one cannot be wet and dry at the same time. If...
  • Naruzeldamaster
    My writing style is somewhere in-between omniscient and "singular" POV. I generally try to keep the POV between the 'main' characters...
  • Incanus
    Incanus replied to the thread Is "Head Hopping" Good or Bad?.
    Yes, this all makes sense. One reason I was a little unclear about this is that I've never written in omniscient POV, and I adhere to...
  • RoccO
    RoccO replied to the thread New Member Here.
    One Chip to rule them D-pad, One Chip to find them, One Chip to bring them D-pad and in the darkness One Chip them.
  • Samuel_the_critique
    Samuel_the_critique replied to the thread New Member Here.
    ohh... kindly send your eulogy, I would love to go through it
  • RoccO
    RoccO replied to the thread New Member Here.
    I prefer vague praise to clear thoughtful feedback, but welcome anyway. I have a eulogy you could look over, before I go forth into Hades.
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