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Chessie
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Hello everyone! There is a scene in my WIP where the protagonist and her sister are running through a forest for their lives. They are eventually separated (quite dramatically) and the fate of the protagonist's sister is unkown temporarily.
I am still deciding whether or not to write the story in 3rd person limited or omniscent. If written in limited, would it be best to bring the sister back towards the middle of the book (to give readers enough suspense over it) or towards the end? I am thinking that towards the end might be too late. If written in omniscent, how soon would anyone suggest bringing in sister's POV?
I know everyone looks for different things as readers and writes differently as well. So from the POV of a reader...which would be more teeth grinding for you?
I am still deciding whether or not to write the story in 3rd person limited or omniscent. If written in limited, would it be best to bring the sister back towards the middle of the book (to give readers enough suspense over it) or towards the end? I am thinking that towards the end might be too late. If written in omniscent, how soon would anyone suggest bringing in sister's POV?
I know everyone looks for different things as readers and writes differently as well. So from the POV of a reader...which would be more teeth grinding for you?